Monday 17 March 2014

The Town mouse and the Country mouse

I had to write about the town mouse and the country mouse and this is what I wrote.
  A town mouse went to see his cousin mouse.to see how  to live in the country. The town mouse did not like his cousin's way of living. so the town mouse invited his cousin to see his way of living. They got there when the person who lived in the house had finished a big feast. The mice had just started eating when two dogs came in barking. The country mouse left his cousin straight away and started back for the country.

point version:

1) Town mouse visit his cousin.
2) Town mouse did not like his living.
3) Town mouse took him back with him.
4) The table was full of food.
5) Dogs came in the country mouse ran back to the country.

2 comments:

  1. Well done Rose Red, exceptional for a 9 year old. I bet you are good at writing poems too.
    Liv x

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  2. Rose Red, very proud of you. To go from reading on your own for the very first time on Wednesday, to writing on your own for the very first time on Thursday! Very, very impressive!! Well done:):)

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